Disguised As A Warrior

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Disguised As A Warrior

Post by Rok on Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:42 am

It's a song that's made to be in the screamo/hardcore genre, hehe. But I hope you guys like it anyway!




It was so long ago, I can barely even remember what happened
It was so horrible, they burned down every thing we had
She was screaming, gasping for her last remaining breath
It seemed so long, the smoke was filling her lungs within

She will be avenged, she will be avenged
She will be avenged, she will be avenged

The house was in flames, even water would seem so dry
Her voice was calling my name, I could hear each and every cry
I don't understand what was trying to hold me back
All I could do was watch as the flames engrossed the sky with black

She will be avenged, I'll get my revenge
Come on, lemme hear you scream

I see a fade glowing in gradients of rays
It is calling me, it is leading me to it
I get pulled into the past, this is the same routine
I then find myself holding matches and a gallon of gasoline
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Post by Joel on Sat Jul 24, 2010 10:50 pm

Impressive. Its amazing that you wrote it all! I'd rate it 8/10.
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Re: Disguised As A Warrior

Post by Marvin on Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:45 am

Nice song,
do you know that song writers write songs depending on their emotions,
are you sad or something XD hahaha
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Re: Disguised As A Warrior

Post by Rok on Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:03 am

Thanks!
@ Marvin: The song is in the screamo genre, haha.

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Post by Dreamyy on Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:55 pm

Awesome, I love it.
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Re: Disguised As A Warrior

Post by Rok on Mon Jul 26, 2010 7:43 am

I'm glad that you guys like it! I hope you all found out what the ending meant.

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